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By scribbler, 1 September, 2018

The august contest winner is Rula for her rare concrete or form poem. Close runner up was raj. here's rule's poem. Join me in congratulating her

They ask me "why did I love
YOU," I say why not YOU built in me
forts; YOU constructed insuperable castles
of trust, YOU turned my quiet breaths to musical
notes, my everyday words turned to lyrics of lullabies
and elysian songs, the hazy eyes then, now draped
in dappled canvas, reflecting colors of YOUR
metaphorical brush, my dry, thirsty lips start-
ed a rich flow, a fountain of ink, I started
to rock and roll on words like
I love YOU. YOUR hearty
world has put in mine
the meaning
of the real
art

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scribbler

6 years 10 months ago

crap!

I did a copy and paste but it didn't copy right. I'll get with the tech guys and see what I did wrong

Rula

Rula

6 years 10 months ago

Hello Stan

Wow! Thank you. I'm so happy to win, I know there were so many good entries and great poetry submitted to August's contest.
As for the form, you should have chosen the advanced formating to get the shape.
Thank you again.

R

raj

6 years 10 months ago

Congratulations Rula

for being the deserved winner. Happy for you..
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Rula

Rula

6 years 10 months ago

Raj

Thank you and congratulations on your runner up. Well deserved as well.

Sparrow

Sparrow

6 years 10 months ago

Rula

Congratulations on winning with a great write.
Even raj was mentioned as coming second now I suppose I have to just accept third and that trip to New York.
Now that the Concorde is not flying anymore, my prize will last longer, lol Have a lovely day out there ,
Yours as always Ian xx

R

raj

6 years 10 months ago

Request to Rula

Since form was also a factor besides of course your poem to be the winner...may I request you to have a blog of how to do the form so others like me can learn it...
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Rula

Rula

6 years 10 months ago

Thank you

dear raj.
I shall do ASAP. just be patient with me ^_^

R

raj

6 years 10 months ago

Thanks Rula

no rush..take your time...a step by step guide would be great...

by the way why i am being labeled impatient by many..lol
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lovedly

lovedly

6 years 10 months ago

My personal congrats to RULA

and a tear of joy for raj ...a close second
I don't now mind losing a hat trick
as long as the BEST WIN

CONGRATS bothly