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raj

Reflection

I was lost
standing beside the ocean
listening to the tumultuous waves
lapping at my feet;
leaving me reflective
to relate
with the bigger picture

surrounded by
air, water. wind,
and a fire in the belly
I was searching
for that Eureka moment

I turned
only to notice
my footprints were consumed
by the receding waves

In that moment I found
a new path
of enlightenment
to be relentless
and make most
of what lies ahead;
like a pearl in an Oyster
polished continuum

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

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Shadowdancer3349

6 years 9 months ago

Raj

I like the way you depict perhaps your past being erased(by the waves) and your future lies ahead

R

raj

6 years 9 months ago

thanks SD

for taking time to read and comment...you have read it right...
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