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Sep 30, 2018
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Owl Haiku
the owl's ribbed coo
like feathered hands, massaging
my taut, anxious soul
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Shadowdancer3349
6 years 9 months ago
Greg
Spot on nicely done
gregwa8
6 years 9 months ago
Thank you!
Thank you!