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NOT NEW Evanescence

Evanescence
the heart fears
the loss of someone
so loved

would we lose all memory
a loved one lost to eternity
in moments
like a rainbow in the sky
after a brief rainy storm
just comes and vanishes
in a moment

like the rainbow
across the Niagara mist
does
Evanescent

sense of fragrance it does leave
but fading memory a fear breeds

will ye forget the one that came
but now has gone

a young one
just of three days
only
lost her mommy

sad isn't it
but it's destiny

About This Poem

Last Few Words: natures extreme cruelty sadness

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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lovedly

lovedly

6 years 7 months ago

Oh my

was it nonsense
none have read it even once
two months
all attention