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Oct 26, 2018
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The Pacific
I stand here
at the shore of the Pacific ocean
distant, distant, very far distance
From here there appears no horizon
just vast expanse
so distant pure imagination
my mind simply wonders
it must be there
some where
Sun as it sets
but of course
as it sets
tells all here ‘tis
and
as it sleeps
it says
Good night!
have sweet dreams
I shall awaken you again
some day
tomorrow may
but as I come
as a new today
today the sun has set
Good night!
to all ye
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
6 years 8 months ago
Autumn Fun
DRAFT was ONLY BEING HELD HERE NEO HAS NO SPACE
lovedly
6 years 8 months ago
Autumn Fun since posted in my time
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