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raj

It's That Time of Year

It's that time of the year
tail ending December
time to let go of the past
knowing forever it won't last
leaving a lot to remember.

The usher at midnight door
greets time just past the hour
turning a page that'd bring
more songs for every dream
like seeds do bear a flower.

It's that time of every year
to make merry, have no fear
the future will bring the spring
more sunshine and rain to sing
it's time to change gear

— raj, Dec 23, 2018

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Trying to work on rhyme sequence aabba

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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raj

7 years 5 months ago

Hi April

Many thanks for finding time to read this one from an Indian and an amateur....few find the time....so highly appreciated..

good to know you liked it....

thanks and regards..
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raj

7 years 5 months ago

Thanks April

for stopping by again and sharing your encouraging words...
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