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Dec 28, 2018
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Cosmic
In the shadows lurks a desire
to seek the naked truth
of free spirit.
Stepping out it's energized
to dwell in the cosmos
for ever after.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
6 years 6 months ago
Hi April
Thanks again for reading and your good words...This not being a haiku/senryu/sonnet I haven't consciously kept track of the syllable count...please feel free to make suggestion if that would help improve meter / cadence...appreciate your stopping by friend..
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Rula
6 years 6 months ago
Cosmic
It Is... I mean the idea and the theme of this little gem.
raj
6 years 6 months ago
Thanks Rula
for reading and your comment..
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