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ANOTHER ANGEL 2018 PASSES BY
ANOTHER ANGEL PASSES BY
Time lapses again and again
into its own golden, nay diamond casket
Another angel passes by
and a new one will emerge tonight
Twilight to twilight
The winds of change as usual continue
CORRUPTION and POLLUTION still continue
They have become and are order of the day
And best of all, all Religious ones have discovered
the imprisonment of LORDS
in Mandirs and Churches and Mosques
need to be abandoned
to keep alive the modern generation
why leave trillions for another generation
what did we inherit can tell me someone
They now lead from the ramparts of Time
they voice their say
Let’s make bridges today
till another Angel passes away.
Time and God manifest the hour
God has endeavoured to remain in power
a tsunami was a recent example
Man’s Golden awards have become
the call of the hour
let us do our duty, as said Lord Krishna
Time is the only constant that did have
Yesterday, today and tomorrow
the power to move on like a steady River
So be as it may
I to all humanity again say
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2019
Today
till it also lapses away
another angel will surely come
when we have also well done
Amen
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
6 years 6 months ago
Loved
A lovely well written piece, Angels are made and sent each moment.. ( to day can you make it one word please x ) Today is the last of 2018 each day seems in a hurry to pass, is it because we are on the downward slope lol..
Take care and have a great new Year,
Yours as always Ian ..
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
thanks Ian
typo shall make it now
today
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
Sounds to me like you think you are dying.
I know you are very old, my friend, but that is never an excuse for self indulgent poetry.
I never gave Joe an inch while he gave us the grace of dying with us, why should I you?
Please use your last times to write with all the skill, wisdom and knowledge you have.
I know you have the skills. About fucking time to use them.
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
cheers
the scenario is quite different
any way thanks for the abuses and curses
Now I am used to it
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
oh bum!
I wrote a long, eloquent and friendly response to this, Lovedly. But it seems to have got lost.
Suffice to say that I believe in you and am very sorry if my goading tactics, trying to bring out the best of you, were unkind and not the best way to go.
You do know that I truly appreciate your gems and that if I don't give you the attention you need it is still more than I give most other poets here.
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
cheers jess
I know
I NOW NOE
THAT's why I regard you so
HAVE A
HNY
AND
take ur medicine
U r like my
One time bro
CHEERS I OWE U
MUCHLEE SO
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
bro? I never had one.
(((hugs)))
Sparrow
6 years 6 months ago
Loved
You are so lucky to have two comments and maybe a hidden third from Jess, even if he shouts at you some times, and you must have seen the Blog of mine about comments..
Have a great new year out there and know we all walk the same road,
Yors Ian ..
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
OOOOOOOOOOOOO UR HIS RIGHT
LOVEDLY LEFT...........>>>>>>>>>>>>>OOOOOOOOOOOOsssssssZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzz
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
u don't hear
now I also can't see
lol may be
STAY Blessed will ye
thanks HAPPY NEEE YR
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
I hear and i c
mostly
imaginary IMAGERY
LOL
I ain't totally blind
nor
am I deaf fully yet
I walk straight @79
another guy @72
was with hair white
mine were not
lol
ah I am fully bald
many thanks
did u not laugh
I heard
thanks
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
and
stay blessed always
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
thankng ye
do read some other
apples off my poetree
soonly
nokros
6 years 6 months ago
Hi Lovedly
The quality of being in touch with your inner self shines through in this beautiful piece. Very current as well.
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
Your maidenstepsacross my page quietly distinctly do say Lovedly
you have yet not
come of age....
Thanks nokros
come across more often
I shall also read some
coming from South Africa
I had a dear poet friend once