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Jan 18, 2019
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Hendrix In the Mood
loose current the tongue will disolve
Sip it, and spit it, barren
we fall if stars
that rap
quit it!
a frozen hungry hendge
the bottom desire would prove
Hendrix in the mood
pay deep homage through the surface of a touch
an ego with one to watch there aura
smooth to the soft parade;
crying...
screaming,
in bitter touch
the face to tempor with a current come clean
candy whisper & yeasterdays taunt
created and crafted in the common ego will not let go;
below is the patient by which to share
shallow is the principle...
in the work of a heroic deed
rap to the rhyme
ryme for the reason
its the changing of the season
treasure a chin word behave
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
gregwa8
6 years 3 months ago
you have a very musical feel
you have a very musical feel to your language. not in the sense that they sound like songs, per se. but I love the sound of your language!