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Rula
Rula
Jan 23, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Coffee Beans

You've been so hard,
I've been so mean,
I wanted you
_No matter what!

Ruthlessly
I got you ground
To brew
My mourning mug

About This Poem

Last Few Words: The (mourning) is intended the way it's written

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Eumolpus

Eumolpus

6 years 5 months ago

I love this

I wish it was so much longer!
The poem is well punctuated but doesn't end with a period....so I hope this means you plan to keep going!!

Rula

Rula

6 years 5 months ago

Hello Eumoplus

Thank you for taking the time to read this little piece inspired by a pro shot. I'm pleased to know that you like it.
Not sure that I have anything to add, but totally agree with you that a period is missed there.
Highly appreciate it.