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Feb 18, 2019
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Walker
Open your eyes walker,
Open your eyes and see the world
Looking around with every step,
Being one with nature
Being one with you.
Open your eyes walker,
Open your heart and feel
‘Cuz what options are there,
Oh walker walking in the walk
Walking through the road,
What option are there
When there are no options?
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Hello Neopoets ! I am submitting my second poem. We all walk in this earth and we all feel lost sometimes. This poem, as you can see, ends with a question.... a question that is not meant for me (writer), it's meant for you (reader) to think about it. All best Ben. P.S.... I have a couple of more writing of mine in my instagram @BenV_Fig.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
6 years 8 months ago
Hello
Let me get a typo out of the way: next to last line either options are or option is.
Now the question about options. There is always the option to do nothing which is what most politicians do lol.I like your extolling walkers to actually Experience their journey......stan
Geezer
6 years 8 months ago
Hmmmm...
I mistook this for a poem about zombies, at first! But then again, maybe it is! Many people walk through life and see, really see, little of the world that surrounds them. ~ Geezer.
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P.S. Bring your work here where we can see it and keep writing.