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Long Nights

Shades of the soul
refusing- - - to close,
another- - - long night.

About This Poem

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Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Midwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: William Stafford, Robert Burns, Rumi.

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Geezer

Geezer

6 years 1 month ago

Nice work...

Yeah, I've had many a night like that. Where you just keep going over he events of the day, asking yourself, " What could I have done differently or why did I do that? ~ Geezer.
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