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lovedly

Jun 28, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Breeze Blows

The breeze blows away

the best of names

yours may also

but mine is for sure
of that there is no panacea
nor cure

— lovedly, Jun 28, 2019

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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S

6 years 11 months ago

Hi Loved

This hollow headed guy had to read this 4 times before I got the full meaning lol. But yes very few names are remembered over the course of time.

6 years 10 months ago

and this NUT Stan

had to revise it ten times
till his nut
was cracked
and
all brains sapped
before garbage
was wrapped

S4

6 years 11 months ago

Loved

You will join all those names..
Have you any news on Joe, Germania ??
I cant even find his works here and he must be honoured by us ..

6 years 11 months ago

Ian

I very much miss him
He always praised my works
(as did Esker)
and was aware I was a neo
will you miss me

when I go also

I KNOW ANSWER IS SILENTLY NO
WE ALL COME TO GO

S4

6 years 11 months ago

Loved

I asked about Joe do you know what happened to him I last spoke to his carer..
It is hard I have lost so many during the last two years but that is my fault for growing old..
Stop fishing you of course will be missed should you leave, I was asking of others.
Take care as we walk the same pathways here,
Yours as always young Bard, Ian ..

6 years 11 months ago

NO

even Stan doesn't know

glad u will miss me
IF I GO
AS AND when

WHEN U WILL
I WON'T KNOW

ur younger IAN

S4

6 years 10 months ago

Loved

I have found Joe's works so am doing the same as I did for Esker and putting them on A few Blogs for others to enjoy,
Yours Ian ..

6 years 10 months ago

great WORK Ian

I MAY CONTRIBUTE when I review
All d best
he deserves it too

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