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Jul 13, 2019
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Brave LIttle Man
I look into your big brown eyes and hold your little hand
Gentle words of encouragement, your sadness I understand
Be brave my Baby, if you can
Not many sleeps, until your home again
They say, you’re too young to have a say
Yet old enough, to rip your world away
You cry for us, when your alone
Your sad voice, begging I want to come home
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Sparrow
6 years 1 month ago
Deday
I loved the piece, the sadness, and the help where from only a few know.
This one is complete in itself but have a look at poetry form for future writes..
Your sense of feelings shine through here, I hope later works can have the same feelings without the sadness,
Yours as always, Ian T (Sparrow)