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Sep 01, 2019
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Sore Feet
Feel the pain
Passing through
Growling with each step
Making a mockery of you
You can’t even pace
Maybe a potion will help
Heal your heel
Hang your head
It’s only a passing itch
That you can’t scratch
Try new shoes
Try the towel wrap
But never stop marching
Even for your precious ache
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 10 months ago
Precious ache...`
reminds me of some people that I know. LoL I may decide to hijack those two words and use them for a title of my own. Thanks before hand, if in fact, I do. Yeah, yeah... I know, never give up and all that crap! I'm not giving up, just gonna sit a spell with my feet in a tub of hot water and Epsom salts. You made those aches and pains too real. This was fun and something that we all can relate to! Geezer.
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Patricia
5 years 10 months ago
Precious Ache
Glad you enjoyed it. It was meant to be kinda fun but I know people like that too. Especially me lol.
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