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Oct 22, 2019
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October Plans... [October Contest]
October is a scary month
In more ways than one
It means the end of summer
For me, that means the fun
Endless raking leaves
Temps are dropping fast
Get everything winterized
Ready for Winter's blast
The streets are looking spooky
We got some fog last night
I've seen my grandkids costumes
They're some scary sights
October's almost over now
Halloween still to come
Hey kids, I take you "Treating"
Make sure you save me some!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Rottiestyl
5 years 8 months ago
Geezer
LOL! Loved it! Great rhyme and cadence in this. We did get fog here also. I hate winter but that’s just my old bones talking. Thanks for a peppy read. ; )
Geezer
5 years 8 months ago
Thanks...
Just a little something for the October contest. Even though I can't win, [being one of the sponsors], I enjoy entering the contests. ~ Geezer.
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Geezer
5 years 8 months ago
Thanks Mark...
I really don't mind winter much, if I don't have to shovel snow or have car trouble. As long as I keep warm and the power doesn't go out, I'm good. Thanks for the read and comment.
Gee.
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