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Oct 23, 2019
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Silence
Silence is all pervading
in the minds of deserted resorts
of the inner synapses
of distraught minds
then we assure
ourselves
of a newer volition
of a novella kind of pieces within
peace without
this nuance of life
none can understand
no doubt what effuses
from the heart
of restless minds
solitary solace of a kind
that none else can find
except isolated
determined minds
wait this is all about
what happens in silence
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow 42
5 years 8 months ago
Loved
A look within but with clouded ways nearly a grand piece..
I was thrown by the word "volition" it stopped me.
Looked it up and it was some heavy Rock so I dropped it,
Then I tried to roll it up a hill and just at the top I ran out of thoughts
so had to start again lol
Otherwise you seem to be on form again,
Take care as you can see I am keeping an eye on you lol,
Yours as always Ian ..
lovedly
5 years 8 months ago
an eagles eye
Ian ensure
very few read here so
i gallop off
as you said
by own volition
no limitation
lovedly
5 years 8 months ago
the faculty or power of using one's will.=volition
for u googled Ian
Sparrow 42
5 years 8 months ago
Loved
Many thanks I failed to read all the descriptions of the word so you are correct.
I shall go and sit in the corner .. lol
Take care old sage only because you is older than me lol Yours Ian T He, He
lovedly
5 years 8 months ago
lol not
but each time one comments
we have to thank em
so 10 advance thanks
Ian