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Sparrow 42
5 years 8 months ago
Lynn
We have had this for many years here.
It starts out OK after someone reminds us then sinks back to
"When I write it is Only ME,ME"
The balance is sorted gradually
A different system of Writing and commenting must be sorted,
Take care yours Ian ..
scribbler
5 years 8 months ago
Yes
One owes a reader at minimum a thank you for having commented
lovedly
5 years 8 months ago
I always did and do
now to not to be disappointed
I care not
expect not to
lovedly
5 years 8 months ago
Just Flashed My Mind
Now I pass by other valleys
where water trickles
silently and slowly
I see nothing but greenery
hence no more do I feel lonely
Pass your time with an open mind
care not who is watching you
or here reading you
Comments now
fly over my bloated mind
as I am aged
and that there lies within my cage
no crime
later I post a poem
it may may not rhyme
but are you poet divine
wanting me to lay supine
Comment at your will Sire
I shall still admire