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Royalty...
Her purple-dyed faux fur jacket
made her look like one of those
lucky rabbit feet on a chain
Oblivious to the stares
she strutted her stuff
in her Uggs and Lapland ear-muffed hat
Eyes glazed in shopping mode
she ran rampant through her list
wrestling her credit to the ground
Elbows bloodied from making way in the crowds
she's good with her social-conscience
she refrains from kicking them when they are down
Cash-strapped and credit-bound
her only remorse is that she can't ransom
the smile she started with
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
5 years 8 months ago
guy
lucky rabbits foot would be quite acceptable here
love the poem sounds lie black friday can't get over how much you writing has improved from a few years back
Geezer
5 years 8 months ago
Thank you...
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