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• She is Judas •

I'm a stick of cigarette to you,
you light me,
smoke me,
and march me rough with shoe.

I trusted you
and wanted to wed you ,
you drank the palm wine
of a stranger and bed with him

they told me you did but I was
Thomas,
I never knew you were Judas.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria, NGA

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Maya Angelou, TS Eliot, Walt Whitman, William Shakespeare, Robert Frost, Williams Blake, William worthsworth, and many more!

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Geezer

Geezer

5 years 5 months ago

Guess the one...

isn't here yet. At least you know the truth! Better to know than to wait with false expectations! I think the word you want is: mash not marsh.
~ Geezer.
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