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Eye Contact

She looked into
my eye

held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done

so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy

hold on for a while
in lovedly's style

About This Poem

Last Few Words: they say eye contact is dangerous some may give inappropriate messages some invites how would one know

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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scribbler

5 years 5 months ago

lol

looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 5 months ago

thanks

scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun