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Jan 28, 2020
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Eye Contact
She looked into
my eye
held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done
so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy
hold on for a while
in lovedly's style
About This Poem
Last Few Words: they say eye contact is dangerous some may give inappropriate messages some invites how would one know
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
5 years 5 months ago
lol
looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem
lovedly
5 years 5 months ago
thanks
scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun