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Feb 15, 2020
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Desire
Melanin skin
Flawlessly glowing
Blazing wintertime
Set fire to my heart
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Liberty Rayne
5 years 5 months ago
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Yes I was, I live in Florida and it’s usually warm here every winter! You can go to the beach anytime here and I absolutely love it.
Geezer
5 years 5 months ago
An interesting...
idea, [blazing wintertime]. Desire, something all of us understand, comes in many colors. ~ Geezer.
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Liberty Rayne
5 years 5 months ago
It definitely does.
It definitely does.
Adrien Brook
4 years 11 months ago
This is really clear and
This is really clear and concise. Impressive that you managed to do that in just the four verses. And the words are really beautiful. They have a really nice sound together. Very poetic!
Gracy
4 years 11 months ago
Hi Liberty, it's the first
Hi Liberty, it's the first time I've read any of your poetry. If you're new here, then welcome to Neopoet family. I'm fairly new, as well. I'll peek at your profile now.
As others have said, you've deftly put a lot in four lines. Concise and clear.
I've been to Florida and it was very warm, both in Winter and Summer. Beautiful area, so much to visit.
I live in Argentine Patagonia and we're still in Winter, had snow recently.
All the best, Gracy