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lovedly
lovedly
Feb 21, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Smile and be Happy

Smile
as long as you can
Shed a tear
that also of joy
O woman
O man

life is full
of endless pains
why add more
for no purpose
nor gains

love life
as it comes along
live each day happily
as long as to this Earth
we all belong

live a life
full of happiness
sing a sweet song

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 5 months ago

Sing...

your little heart out, lovedly! 'Tis true, 'tis true, a song a day keeps the heart young and gay! ~ Gee.
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lovedly

lovedly

5 years 5 months ago

lol

humour is life GEE
gay is just a mile stone in life
which way for whom
heaven and only he knows

be happy
I like you frankness

Eumolpus

Eumolpus

5 years 5 months ago

nice song

this would really make a nice song. It looks easy, but it isn't. the words fits.
I'd try to find someone to put it to music.
Not me, Alas!

S

scribbler

5 years 4 months ago

Hi Loved

We must treasure age as it's a privilege denied many