Those Lovely Eyes

Those eyes my.... my
young and fresh
blushing young teen
16
are still so beautiful
looking at a voyeur in me
almost nearing 80

Age is not a factor
to factor in
it's only my bleak eye's
thin azure skin

I see her right shoulder
touching her ear
the other is like
Down Under

but she still is a dear

In the Atlantic ocean beach
I see her hair shining
flowing in the fastest wind
she desperately wants to hold 'em

but her beautiful face
is sparkling
may Neo-Poets permit me
to call her

O my baby Darling!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This poem instills in one there is no fear to admire What is age but just a number so don't yourself cage as poets did earlier.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

5 years 4 months ago

I don't believe...

there has ever been a man or woman that has set an upper or lower limit to the age of beauty, just what you do about it.
I often see a girl of youth [teenager] and admire the beauty of her and I am in my seventies. Now, if I were to try and make something of it, I'm sure that I would be called a pervert and rightfully so. So, admire all you want. And don't use symbols for [at] ! ~Geezer.
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