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lovedly

Mar 27, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Borrowed Sun

HOPE Kindly

the light has not gone
again the sun today
has shone
so will it
morn after morn
till a newer mankind
continues to be born

A brave mask
must all Humans
adorn

See the sun
has smiled after long
and
again it has come
to shine
create another fresher
humans man-mine

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

5 years 3 months ago

A dozen poems
in STREAM
UNREAD
so it seems
So not to waste your time
I am going to
lock out
going in for a
LONG ISOLATION
COWARD 19

5 years 3 months ago

What a poignant poem, if only some people understood we all need each other. Very well put. Regards Roscoe..

5 years 3 months ago

neopoets are very few
like you

we all know
the sun smiled at me
and you followed too

Now I shall also keep track of you
Let our sun
be a common
SON
THANKS RGDS

5 years 3 months ago

It seems that I can't leave you alone for a minute. Remember, I always read you, just don't alays have the time to critique or comment
~ Geezer.
.

5 years 3 months ago

but have to courage to comment
ur too good for me
Gee

5 years 3 months ago

You are just a different kind of poet. We are all individuals that express differently
~ Geezer.
.

5 years 3 months ago

yes one of a KIND

You are just a

different UNIQUE

kind of poet