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My Favorite Book

I read it once and
some hundred times when
I was younger as
well as an adult.

A tale 'bout a witch
who-out of jealous-
offered a beauty
a poisoned apple
that sent her at once
to a longish nap.

Everyone there moaned and
grieved for the beauty's
mishap, everyone cried.

Till a passing prince
approached the sleeping
beauty with the kiss of life
to live happily after.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A belated participation in March's Contest.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Hello Jerry again

seems like there are different versions of my favorite "Sleeping Beauty" or at least what I still remember. :)
Really appreciate your kind visit.

Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

A valuable

add Jerry.
Always appreciate it.

Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Hello Mark

so many thanks for your time and the kind visit.
Always happy to share, so just ticked the media box.
Thank you again.

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 3 months ago

The Sleeping Princess...

and the handsome Prince are favorites of young ladies around the world, but I guess that little boys are not supposed to enjoy them? My oldest boy loved all those stories about Princes and Princesses when he was young. He dreamed of finding a Sleeping Beauty or Snow White to awaken and now that he is a man, he has achieved that very dream. He has awakened a Princess and hopefully will live happily forever after. Nice Job, Rula. ~ Geezer.
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Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Gee

Happy to know about your son having his princess. It is almost one of the hardest jobs nowadays. I thing boys and girls alike admire those fairy tales, or that what I think.
Appreciate your kind visit.

Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Oh Mark

don't know how to thank you. Your efforts are really appreciated.
Thank you!

Rula

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Lol Jerry

I mean Shahriar.(Sultan) :)