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May 16, 2020
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WHISTLING TRAIN
Your train poem reminds me
of a small village with population explosion
compared to its inmates and space
A train always passed by
whistling daily at 4.15 a.m.
Then it was too early
to wake up
too late to go back to sleep
what else could couples do
your guess is as good as mine
Such is the expansiveness of imagery
related to whistling
now by trains only
lovely population grew up
silently
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
5 years 2 months ago
Whistling Train
Hi, Lovedly,
Clever poem!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
5 years 2 months ago
life is fun
if one enjoys a PUN
LOL THANKS
L