Alll My Lettuce...

Alll my lettuce, I will give to youuuuu
Alll my lettuce, I will give to youuuuu
You've asked me for mine and I say that is fine
Alll my lettuce, I will give to youuuuu

At the burger joint, where we have just ate
We had the big burgers and said they were great
A soda and fries and I won't tell you no lies
The catsup was missing and I was really pissing

But alll my lettuce, I will give to youuuu
Alll my lettuce I will give to youuuu
Alll my lettuce, alll my lettuce....

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just having a little fun, the wife and I ate BK today while we out to shopping today and I was going to ask for my sandwich without lettuce and she said, just get it and you can put it on my sandwich. This poem was born in that moment! LoL

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Comments

lovedly

5 years 1 month ago

add me on please

its fun for me
we three
lol
Gee

say HIGH
to mommy
kindly

Geezer

5 years 1 month ago

We have to go shopping...

and when we went yesterday, we left early to get a jump on the heat, so we didn't have breakfast. Lunch time was close and we were passing BK. They have window service only, so we sat in the car to eat. Not too much fun, but oh well. The radio had played a Beatle tune a little while ago... and there you have it. Most times I have paper and pen handy, but sometimes not. Thanks for stopping by. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender

5 years 1 month ago

All My Lettuce

Hello, Geezer!
A lot of fun here, and very clever!
I tried to add to this, but couldn't match your wit, so I decided to Lettuce Be.
Thank you for some much needed jocularity!
L

Geezer

5 years 1 month ago

Glad to...

have you laughing. Have you read, The Devil's Ride? I figure you might like that
~ Geezer.
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