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May 27, 2020
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Titles........LET'S WAIT..My latest poem
''Awesome poetic blend
of the poet''s expression
flowing like a river
that ultimately unites
in the sea.
Skunk, flunk and hunk
made it even more daring.
Awesome beautifully written.
Admirations and appreciations Sir.''
ADD ON
''The flames of anguish
Burns that was exquisite
Leaving ashes that serve manure
Holy is the soul
Who refrain it whole.
What victory it is
Saying
I''m best
You are less......
(PLEASE TITLE IT)
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
thanks Teddy 15
So it's UNIQUE
WOW WHAT A GREAT SENSE
OF CONVEYANCE
Gracy
5 years 1 month ago
Hello lovedly, intriguing
Hello lovedly, intriguing poem, not sure that I understand all. Terry has given you a fine title and understands far more that I do, at first read. Small nit below:
"made it even more dared." I suppose you mean "daring"?
Thank you, Gracy
Geezer
5 years 1 month ago
I vote for...
More Than The Rest! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
Not quite clear GEE
What should be the title
of this comment of a poem
Thanks