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May 29, 2020
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What Buddha Says
Mind is everything
What you think you can become
Why am I still poor
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
5 years 1 month ago
haiku
line one is 6 beats
line 2 is 6 beats
a haiku is 5/7/5 pattern
Sen99
5 years 1 month ago
Edit
Hello thanks for your comment, I have updated
Hope its now correct number of syllables
Geezer
5 years 1 month ago
I see...
that you have gotten it right this time. Nice. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
5 years 1 month ago
Buddha
Hello!
Enjoyed your Haiku very much!
Thank you!
Lavender
Sen99
5 years 1 month ago
Buddha
Glad you enjoyed it ! Many thanks
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
Buddha is no more
so you may join
stan's titles workshop
perhaps
'Buddha said so'' OR
ENLIGHTEMENT OF BUDDHA
will be more apt
welcome
new poet of UK
Sen99
5 years 1 month ago
end of Buddha
hello from UK thanks for letting me join workshop titles
Sen