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Mar 07, 2011
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Fate Haiku
She stood like Lotus
in a brothel of abused
a stillborn Virgin
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kailashana2
14 years 4 months ago
Oooooohh's & Ahhhhhhh's
Oooooohh's & Ahhhhhhh's
he released her
from his bondage,
the sky wept with fragrance
~A
raj
14 years 4 months ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
a droplet of tear
sparkled of her dignity
amidst the ruins
Kailashana2
14 years 4 months ago
a lifetime opening
a lifetime opening
lotus blossom
blushing deep-roots
~A
raj
14 years 4 months ago
dear Anna...thank you for
dear Anna...thank you for these loely poetic responses...which is inspiring...
Her devout spirit
now buoyant in renewed faith
searches for her Knight
raj
14 years 4 months ago
Dearest Shirl...
thanks for your visit and comment....this was inspired by the abuse wrath upon innocent girls in the flesh trade...yes..you are right..there is a dark side to this haiku which you noticed....
much love..
raj
14 years 4 months ago
Dearest Xena
thank you for your kind words of appreciation...
much love..
raj
14 years 4 months ago
Dearest JayCee
good to know you liked this one...this one is an attempt to focus attention on International Women's Day on the plight of those women whose dignity and beauty are preyed upon by those in the flesh trade...
much love..