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Funny What.

I am funny
no
but shall compose

life is nothing else
but bottled up fun
like having
a Soda and rum

could begin
initially for some

but I love
Scotch
it only corks
when taken on the rocks

it gives a hard kick
no manly horse's
does it so quick

many guys
standing besides me
run they say

'mad man'
he

seeking only fun
sad he is now
a dark black horse
but be happy

a real oldie

About This Poem

Last Few Words: trying to be punny funny is it LOL- worthy

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 1 month ago

Nudely huh?...

Now, that would be funny! When we get old, we don't look like we should go around nude. Matter of fact, the more clothes the better! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

lovedly

5 years 1 month ago

well Gee

sans teeth
sans smell
sans taste
sans that
do you recall
Shakingspeare
still could be funnier

15 has already slaughtered me

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 1 month ago

lovely lovely

Kings beddy
15 x15 at the least
lol
shall glue the title
lol

S

Sparrow 42

5 years 1 month ago

Teddy

Careful you missed an e from "their" also an extra vowel added, lol
Single Malt NO ice, lol..
Take care have a lovely day,
Ian Again x

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 1 month ago

which title 15

and which
e

is missing and from where

r u foxing me
lol then

S

Sparrow 42

5 years 1 month ago

Loved

Behave you can see that June is spelt with an "E" you just want someone to talk to lol ...