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Jun 06, 2020
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Funny What.
I am funny
no
but shall compose
life is nothing else
but bottled up fun
like having
a Soda and rum
could begin
initially for some
but I love
Scotch
it only corks
when taken on the rocks
it gives a hard kick
no manly horse's
does it so quick
many guys
standing besides me
run they say
'mad man'
he
seeking only fun
sad he is now
a dark black horse
but be happy
a real oldie
About This Poem
Last Few Words: trying to be punny funny is it LOL- worthy
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 1 month ago
Nudely huh?...
Now, that would be funny! When we get old, we don't look like we should go around nude. Matter of fact, the more clothes the better! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
well Gee
sans teeth
sans smell
sans taste
sans that
do you recall
Shakingspeare
still could be funnier
15 has already slaughtered me
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
lovely lovely
Kings beddy
15 x15 at the least
lol
shall glue the title
lol
Sparrow 42
5 years 1 month ago
Teddy
Careful you missed an e from "their" also an extra vowel added, lol
Single Malt NO ice, lol..
Take care have a lovely day,
Ian Again x
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
which title 15
and which
e
is missing and from where
r u foxing me
lol then
Sparrow 42
5 years 1 month ago
Loved
Behave you can see that June is spelt with an "E" you just want someone to talk to lol ...
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
ha haaaaa what an idiot lovedly
misses from every where an
e
for e mail
he writes
send only a male
lol
funny be he
okay double the
e