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Jun 07, 2020
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Night is Disturbing
Night is Disturbing
no one is coming
the lights have dimmed
tonight
CORONA
shows a rise
who will hold the Prize
Of making a vaccine .
The world couldn't make one
since last Spanish flu
as time flew
100 years now
Who says the vaccine will come
before the next virus is due
who knows it
can any one
confide in me
night is disturbing
About This Poem
Last Few Words: just passing time ...couldn't sleep--- slept the whole of Sunday
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 1 month ago
Lack of sleep...
makes it more likely that you will die from lack of sleep. Don't worry about the virus, it's lack of sleep that makes you careless and more likely to make a mistake and get killed. ~ Geezer.
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lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
ha ha ha lol
I sleep more
but off timings.. that's all Gee Thanks I will love to live
as I shall never return
who has anyway
can you say
lovedly
5 years 1 month ago
I like your support
you are really great
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