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Jun 28, 2020
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Remain Silent
Thanks all
who are my well wishers
now I post fewer poems
it irks some
some are jealous
many indifferent
they need a vacancy
in the far distance
and
wait a million years
for a
REBIRTH
foolish some
can't enjoy a lovely
sunny day
and
a swim in Atlantic ocean
as I did
yet say they are looking
for an unknown heaven
mad guys
teach them some one
life's real ways
as
CORONA
won't soonly go away
may for much longer stay
could be 202x
my guess
if you maintain social distance
and
produce a different
kinda generation
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years ago
Mixed messages...
Always present the one that soothes, last. No fooling. ~ Geez.
lovedly
5 years ago
Gee
you always nail me
thanky