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Jul 01, 2020
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To You, My Grandchildren
Speak Out.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
5 years ago
Hi, Teddy
I love minimalist poetry. There is much I've tried to say to my grandchildren through poetry, but actually this covers it.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
L
Geezer
5 years ago
Surprise...
I am constantly surprised by the ingenuity of your work. I am on the edge here. If it had been any other day or maybe even any other person, I'm sure that my reaction might have been much different. I won't say that I don't know how, because I do. If you understand that, then you will understand how I am on the edge. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
5 years ago
Thank you, Geezer,
I do understand.
L
Rula
5 years ago
Dear Lavender
Not sure I would call this poetry, but I would least you've spoken out loudly with two words.
Thumbs up dear.
Lavender
5 years ago
Hi, Rula
As always, thank you so much!
L
Lavender
5 years ago
Hi, Jerry
Ha, ha! And Telemachus would be correct - JerryK is one of the finest story-tellers, too! But I'm glad we all aren't driven by the same muse in the same poetic direction. There would be no diversity and we would learn nothing.
Thank you for reading!
L