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Apple Your Minds

Change your thoughts

Anaconda and apple
without seed
how would you be
there would be
no flowers
in any valley
hope you are
applying your mind
as is being done
by those more modern

current mankind needs one to remind
one needs to have a superlative own mind
of your own kind

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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scribbler

4 years 11 months ago

But

thinking for oneself is So hard. Thus the democrat party lol

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 11 months ago

my comment vanished

I observe some error in neos technicals
some ne have a look

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