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Dream Girl She

A lovely dream came
to you
to me dreams
come to teach
most of my poems
are dreamy
they come to me
now to you I reach
read 'em please

you yourself are
a lover's dream
shhhhh, don't scream
love is like ice cream
enjoy let it not melt
wish later you will be
lovely girl you must be
keep dreaming of me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

5 years ago

tnx 15

write a fab free* verse it would be so wonderful. * MEANING????

This is another fun write my friend