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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 10, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Doggy Love

Reminds me of my
Lovely
doggy
its tongue is always
hanging
around
wet saliva dripping
and
Lovely gasping

it's really handy
at times he licks
often he conveys
a ravishing smile
my tongue lashes back
hello
Lovely
lick me

he wags his tail and conveys
0ld guy you

I love your grand kids
and
flies away
quickly

my sweet tongue
comes out
O Lovely

now not to be seen
lol

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Gracy

Gracy

5 years ago

Hi lovedly, what a sweet poem

Hi lovedly, what a sweet poem. I love doggies, used to have so many. Yours sounds like a darling. Not sure what you mean by "Oldies". At the beginning it should be "its tongue". No other nits, gives me a good feeling. The title might be cliche, but it all fits together nicely. Thanks for cheering me up, Gracy