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Aug 03, 2020
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Eulogy
I come from a world,
where mountains and valleys
hold their grounds.
I am the talking drum,
voice of the voiceless.
I am the bridge that connects
art with the heart.
I am the diamond in the rough.
I draw feelings 'cos I'm skilled with pencils
I write right, base on literature's rite.
I wrap my feelings in beat.
I act art in all ways
I act always.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dandini
4 years 9 months ago
I found this to be very well
I found this to be very well written. My only suggestion would be to get rid of the abbreviation 'cos, 4 lines from the bottom as it's too informal. Why not "since" or "as" or even a semi-colon???