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Sep 24, 2020
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Few Win Many Lose
''She'' was good
but
we all are still striving
I have spent my entire youth
but still I'm trying
surviving
This world is a place
for furious ones
who rise and have fun
at cost of another one
all have a marathon run
When will I rise
and
fly sky high
like a soaring
eagle
never to return
hoping in my last battle
I'd have won
Let's afresh now begin
time is moving thin
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Edward nigma
4 years 9 months ago
Good work
That is life you live a little experience achievements and hardships then you take your last breath exhaling life and inhaling death.
I hope your doing fine in this horrid time of mass hysteria that plagues our populous
scribbler
4 years 9 months ago
Hi loved
To the victor go the spoils. BUT who is the true victor?
lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
high stan
please define true
neither me can't say about you
you to Susan ma'am are true
after a long tyme you come stan
isn't it true of you
winner r u
lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
good analysis ma'am
kind words are rarely heard
this world is now heart broken
Covid curse
is it or was it
of human origin
flying on the backs of
BATS