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Sep 26, 2020
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Live On Till Switch is On
No need to apologize
I know oldies are read
but by minuscule few
we all have passed our teens
also in poetry .
Stay well
a guy told me and my mom
I'd die when I'm. 13
now I'm a bit out of reach @81+++plus
but still don't know
when I will catch the last bus
or miss my final flight
yet finally drown
in the river flowing by
where I live
I can't swim
lol
life I take it as humourly
(fun)
that's how I have lived on
may touch 89
sorry 99
so smile with me
lady
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Breakinglogic
4 years 9 months ago
Lovedly,
Lovedly,
when I have time I like to peruse the oldies:)
I saw this as a comment on another poem of yours. I wanted to just say Please enjoy your river from a safe distance.
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
Just keep being eternally...
Lovedly. You won't ever drown, because you float so well. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
Hahahaha Gee
how well you know me so I'm haappp peee
will keep floating like ye