Fantasy Man

Simple gestures that make me smile
His caring touch to last awhile
A man of honor to admire
Not a cad or a common liar
A humble soul who is kind
Of kindred thoughts: we're of one mind
Whose laughter makes me want to dance
In him, I 'll always take a chance
Whose very presence make others stare
His movements like a gentle bear
At home,he loves to cook and sing
In him I’ve found my everything

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: NYC

Favorite Poets: Keats, Donne, Wordworth, Longfellow

Comments

franny50

14 years 3 months ago

Thank You everyone and thanks

Thank You everyone and thanks for the line change suggestion.And Xena,I am happy to be back.Hope you are well!

Sparrow

10 years ago

Fran

Your style is fine and I see that it is your normal way of writing.
Now we can get down to finding our feet not metric lol.
There are many that can help you on the poetry trail, though I am just here, ask if needed for one of the mentor types if you should need more, Yours as always Ian..