Classical Composer Limerick #4

The Hungarian composer Franz Liszt
Sat down on a lady friend's fist;
With the suavest of smiles,
He said "stroke my piles
While I toss myself one off the wrist".

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: London, Culture Capital of the World

Favorite Poets: Siegfried Sassoon, Wilfred Owen, Rupert Brooke, Chaucer, Shakespeare to name but a few. And VERY IMPORTANTLY: Erich Fried, a leftwing Austrian of Jewish ancestry who fled the Nazis and became a British citizen in 1949., And, other writers (non-poets mainly): Raymond Chandler, Irvine Welsh, Anthony Burgess, Graham Greene, Charles Bukowski, John le Carré, Anthony Horowitz, Mick Herron, Margaret Attwood, Edna O'Brian, Maeve Binchy., Writers who I find vastly over-rated: TS Eliot, Virgina Woolf, Sylvia Plath, Phil Larkin, E.A. Poe, A. Ginsburg, Longfellow, Gerald Manley Hopkins (actually I LOATHE Hopkins more than damson-dappled words can say).

Comments

Gracy

4 years 11 months ago

Hi Edna, you always let us

Hi Edna, you always let us have a good laugh with your limericks! I love the last two lines...wow.
The title, theme, spacing an all else are fine. Kudos to you!
All the best, Gracy

Edna Sweetlove

4 years 11 months ago

Ta very much..

..for your comment.
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