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Nov 01, 2020
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Where will lovers meet
In silence
loneliness
mundanes
grief
joy
day
night
in brightness
darkness
but only meet
if at all
in drooping eyes
as hearts smile...
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Today is lovers day as is any day
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dystopia
2 years 11 months ago
Hi! This poem is such a gem,
Hi! This poem is such a gem, it appears at first glance as a bunch of words but when you read it the meaning is so clear! I would just take a look at the last line and make it plural as you are discussing two lovers. This is a piece is truly short and sweet!
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
See
never ever delete a composed poem
angels still exist and come to teach
out of the vast wilderness I beseech
Thanks for your kind emergence
Dystopia
2 years 11 months ago
Nice work on the revision! It
Nice work on the revision! It is a small change but does make a difference! Also… your comments in poetry form are also just as delightful (makes me think)!
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
thank you
kindness be thy virtue kid