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Dandini
Dandini
Nov 23, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My love is like a flower

What enchantment lies
In the awakening of a flower!
Laughter or tears
It all throbs with love!
The whole meadow
Is carpeted with colour
And my heart beats
Like a trapped butterfly!

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: England

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets include Siegfried Sassoon and (obviously) Shakespeare. I quite like Charles Bukowski too even though he was a bit plebeian.

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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 7 months ago

I agree...

whole-heartedly with Teddy. Very nice and truly romantic. I also agree with the suggestionmm of using the word flutter. Makes it sou nd more in keeping with a butterfly! Again, welcome to Neo. ~ Geezer.
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