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Dec 01, 2020
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O WHAT A MELODY
I search for melody
in my remains
as I wake up and see
is blood still flowing in my veins
I have the sister
take my BP
She smiles at me
Sir
I can still hear your heart beat
relax now go to sleep
why do you weep
the world is still asleep
you have woken up too early
go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody
keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
15
tnx
so far so good still alive
masked
Geezer
4 years 7 months ago
Yup...
Still a poet to be read. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
Thanks Gee
You are life and sole of LOVEDLY
on neo yet
Irenicus
4 years 7 months ago
Inspiring
go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody
keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody
Beautiful in every singing of it...
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
thank you so much
you have the makings
of a poet in history
Irenicus
Irenicus
4 years 7 months ago
Awwww
that's very flattering, lovedly.
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
luv you
sonny
be at it
poetry is not everyone's cup of tea
I know very little of it still
but thousands read me
at their own will