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be MERCI FULL GODS

God's- Smaller- - Mercies

Women love GOD
more than their
smaller men

he never at all
troubles 'em

man never spares
a moment
without 'em

let's enjoy
with our women

let her love her god
how does it matter
when we are busy
she is happy

GODS watching

looks after her safety
kids would be coming

She very much needs
a day care attendance
God is always happy
to help 'em

let them love
more of god
also
bless her soles

Omen

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 7 months ago

Dear Teddy, I'm intrigued by

Dear Teddy, I'm intrigued by your poem. I like the title and theme, but I don't understand the matter of women and men loving/or not loving God. Could you explain a little?
All the best, Gracy

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 7 months ago

Ma'am did u mean to address me

well a guy composed a poem
his wife s always praising
God
so he said let her
as long as she does not forget me
though 'm no
LORD- GOD
Let her pray whenever
I'm busy
she so does
now her more
he loves