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a spiritual being
surrounded by your aura
the intensity of emotions
we go through the motions
integrity and honesty
the way that it should be
more than i could ever ask for
saving my heart from becoming sore
making love in another realm
sprouting roots like an elm
you are my addiction
without you, life is fiction
you’ve changed me in ways that no one else could
taught me love, constantly use consent, respect my body, and you’ve always taken are of me
unrealistic
i’ve been told my expectations for a spouse are unrealistic
yet you have gone beyond my expectations
showed me unconditional love
and i never saw it coming
scribbler
4 years 10 months ago
Greetings
Well the title is one which I suspect most people use at least once. I know I did lol. But your poem is quite different than mine although it also expresses deep feelings. Holler if you have questions about site.
Geezer
4 years 10 months ago
A good rap...
I really like your lines: "I have been told that my expectations for a spouse are unrealistic,
yet you have gone beyond my expectations".
"Showed me unconditional love
and I never saw it coming. Nice stuff! Welcome to Neo. Give us more of this. ~ Geezer.
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