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Dec 10, 2020
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Dear shadow
Lying in a misty mellow meadow
just me and
my shapeless shadow.
I cry cause I’m to shy
To show him how
I’ll have to go .
“Dear shadow
Wipe that tear
From your eye .
I wish you could hold
my hand so you can
Understand.
That as time
goes by
We will
Shrivel up
and die .
so say
goodbye
to the sun.
cause the
The deed
Has been done.
Oh
this is to much
To bear .
I wish we could
Go back
To where
Our eyes
lit up with light.
Instead of
dimming down
Deep
Into the night .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Okay
Thank you
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Inspiration
I was inspired to write this when I watching a cat stevens concert he was singing wild world. and I noticed that on the ground his shadow grew enormous and I saw this I thought through time as he got older his shadow will get and smaller and smaller. Until finally both he and his shadow are gone.
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Me to
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Okay