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Failed

So deep within the galaxies,
The limits of my searching mind,
Your constant love had once installed
A compass of the truest kind.

It should have been the polar star,
The guide on my oft chancy quest.
I knew that, as I traveled far,
Your loving thoughts would guide me best.

They flamed as though they were a torch,
A beacon meant to guide my heart
Into that peaceful port--that’s you--
But, somehow, we then grew apart.

How was it then, that I had failed
To keep our rendezvous somewhere
In life? Throughout the time that passed,
You never failed; you’ve done your share.

My health and youth waned all too soon
And worldly fortune took to flight;
The truth is that I failed myself
When I refused to heed your light.

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Region, Country: Arizona, USA

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Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

4 years 7 months ago

Wow

Left me humbled. Fine piece you got there.

VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 7 months ago

Hello Ray,

I appreciate your nice comment. Thank you so much. Van.

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 7 months ago

Nice stuff...

I guess that a new perspective makes for a different outlook. I like the rhyme, it makes it feel kind of fuzzy warm. ~ Geezer.
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VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 7 months ago

Geezer,

sorry for the deception,and now you may send me into exile, although I have no problem with you; I just felt the need for a fresh start;therefore the new alias. Take care, and have a great Christmas. Lynda and I have decorated the house, indoors and outdoors.
Be well. Jerry